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Saturday, October 9, 2010

Coffee time (Part 1)


Chuck had sat down at a crowded sidewalk table in front of the coffee shop. The seat wasn't by accident; there was a beautiful woman across from him, and he was hoping to build up the nerve to ask her on a date. However, he wouldn't get the chance. Sparks few out of a nearby alley, and the next thing he knew, he was looking into his own eyes. Somehow he was now in the body of the woman he was checking out! He put his hands over his mouth in shock. He couldn't even seem to spit out a word to stop his body from getting up and leaving. He better act fast, or he'd be stuck like this!


2 comments:

  1. is this miley cyrus?

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  2. WOW! super use of pic. And a great mysterious story - for example why is she getting up & leaving? I can't wait for more!

    Bye the way thanks for the answer on your multi part stories but I still can't see SIDELINED ending like this - for example he'll be 2 years inside her body - will be he be too comfortable to swap back. And also why would she leave the spell - perhaps its a fake & when he comes back it will cause him too forget who he had been & end up marrying his old self> Just some possible ieas.

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