Thursday, December 30, 2010

Adding up

Fred had woken up in an unknown hotel room. He found himself naked, but even more strangely was that he was in the body of a woman. The woman’s outfit tossed by the bedside and a wad of cash left next to him didn’t do much to ease his suspicions. He put the clothes on, grabbed the money, and rushed downstairs. Outside the hotel, a man waited for him, insisting that he get into a large black car...or else. Fred really didn’t like the way this was adding up...


  1. Liking it so far, hope it has a second part :) Thanks.

  2. WOW! Excellent story & use of pic. vrey sexy girl. Is there going to be apart 2? I think he's a fool if he gets in that car!!