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Thursday, June 20, 2013

Master plan (Part 1)

Kimberly had always felt a little bit of guilt about being born into such a life of wealth and privilege. Her rich friends would often laugh off these concerns, but when the conversation was overheard by a poor engineering student named Jason, things would change. He had a device that could change everything. He aimed it at her and fired. Now it was only a matter of time before it would take effect. Jason was surprised when he started to feel strange later that day; he hadn’t expected things to start working so soon. Within moments, he was at a charity ball inside of Kimberly’s body; the device had worked! He quickly excused himself and headed to the bus station. He knew that everyone in the upper crust of society would be looking for Kimberly, but no one would ever think of looking for her at the bus station. He’d lay low for a while. After all, he did have a master plan in the works.

2 comments:

  1. WOW WHAT A start. Good story, myterious and well told. Hows she doing in his body?

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  2. Fantastic start! I can't wait to see the rest of the master plan!

    Cheers
    Zapper

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